The silvery eye returned to life,

The fiery eye returned to strife.

When one killed to other,

When father killed mother.

 

He will find peace,

Stop his suffering please!

 

Tears are shed every time,

When that bloody pool began to shine.

Dimensions separate each,

Both from each other’s reach.

 

He will find peace,

Stop his suffering please!

 

One is born from both,

To both one is close.

His friends the sword and staff,

He shall suffer fiery wrath.

 

He will find peace,

Stop his suffering please!

 

Perils greater than in the past,

His suffering shall be vast.

Wounds so great shall be,

Repeatedly inflicted upon he.

 

He will find peace,

Stop his suffering please!

Awesome job Robert. I really like how in every stanza there are more clues as to what is going on and how the story slowly builds and defines the characters. I also like the colorful lanuage presented in the poem. One word I really like is shall. One of my English teachers always used to stress how powerful shall is as opposed to will, and it makes your poem all the more meaningful.